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Old 12-04-2008, 06:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default 3 paragraph essay, 500words?

hello, I wrote a 500 word essay, and it only has three long paragraphs. I am worried because usually a 500 word essay has 4-5 paragraphs, but mine has only three long paragraphs including intro, 1 body paragraph, and conclusion. But I can't seem to find a way to divide those paragraphs into smaller ones. For example, I am describing a person in my introduction, and it turned out to be pretty long, but not repetitious or wordy, and I don't think I can shorten it or divide it into smaller paragraphs. I only have one main idea for body paragraph: how that person shaped my personality. I tried to break up the body paragraph, but since my intro is unusually long, I am not sure if it is ok to have shorter body paragraphs compared to my intro. Anyways, do you think a 500 word essay with only 3 paragraphs is ok as long as my points are made clear and it is well organized? Or should I try to write one more paragraph about how the person shaped my personality?
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